Pretty Crazy

Hello Stevie! I'm going to try something new and write what I'm thinking as I read. Here goes! The crackling static filled the room, waking the girl from a deep ...

I really like this! It's so simple and yet you use big words, which even it out. Your rhyming patterns (is that the right term?) are excellent and the flow ...

Hello Bhayden! First of all I must say this is amazing. The concept and moral to this is. . . wow. I love how you made it fantasy-like and imaginative. ...

Hello! Welcome to YWS. I like Tiny Tower too. We have a few more things in common than that, but what do they matter right? :P

Wow! You had me hooked from the first sentence. Excellent attention-grabber. Now I'm curious and dying to know what happened and why. There's nothing to nit-pick, nor is there anything ...

Oh wow, that was genius! I thought it was another whiner about relationships, but then at the end. . . Well, there's no need to say why it's so funny. ...

Same as here. Pretty Crazy. I'm on both of the sites, this is my first year doing the main program. I'm so going to fail. xD

Those sure aren't pine trees! What beautiful pictures! Sunsets are always awesome. I like the second one better, the red contrasted against the palm tree is stunning. The power lines ...

Hey, I'm back again! Well at least things are finally moving along. Blade seems like a really cool character. I can't wait to see what happens later on into the ...

Hello bibi, I'm going to attempt and review this for you. :) Through a street with silver lights, I walk , Down this path, I walk . You use walk ...

Your friend is a good model. And you're a good photographer. These aren't nescessarily epic, but still cool. ;) Keep having fun taking pictures! ~Crazy

Um, okay. This is all slashed out. Did you hit the button by accident or what? Nevertheless, I'm no wimp. I'll review this for ya. :) Ugh, it's a huge ...

Hello Pink, I agree with you that this chapter isn't as good as the others. It seems a little forced. A lot of the sentences could be rephrased to make ...

The pace of this is quite fast, and yet it tells the story really well. It has a feel of urgency to it, which suits it by the way. It's ...

I'd like advice/opinions on this, please: I'm not demanding you read/review all three chapters. Whatever works for you is fine. Thanks in advance! :D